studio pin up 2day

as usual i get a fucked up feedback from my straight forward lecturer...its my fault tho coz being lazy over the weekends and only started rushing like a mad person since yesterday...wheres my effort and hardcore energy goin?!....gonna search it back before its too late...

anyway..heres the pin up for the studio just now....

see the criss crossing thing?...i tried to merged the seperation of traffic system that was existing at the site and scooping the visitor into my proposed building to generate catalystic activities (shopping)...but sadly not working...coz the places that visitors get scooped into is a gigantic boring carparks with repetitive columns....aiks..gotta make it better nex week

looking at my previous exercise as well as the contested symmetry, i tried to capture the technique and apply onto this criss crossing 'road' that i created by slicing the parts of building that was falling over the criss crossing pathways and then rotate and re-merging 'em...i was then told that ive got enough on techniques on doin things, instead need to focus onto perpective 3D of the site rather than trying to get the most out of the plan itself...

the carpark plan that was intended to scooped visitors into the building, as was told and agreed with the fact that its quite fugly...so my lecturer asked me to change back to previous carpark layout...

first floor plan with the not-so glamorous ramp entrance to the building..lolx

some view points to and from the proposed site with unfinished unimpressive motif wraping throughout the skin of the building...

p/s: watch me, im gonna fucking produce a greater work nex week!!! im not gonna fail!! and start singing 'i can survive'...more to come after tomorrows portfolio class...might post up some works so stay tune ;)